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Wendy Varley's avatar

Love this, Rebecca. What a family saga - and history of a bar. Gorgeous writing.

Didn’t quite twig the ending, and wondering if I need to go back to an earlier piece for the clues? Who’s the lost-and-found woman on the news?

Rebecca Goodall's avatar

You will find out in the next piece. I debated ending with that now I’m thinking I should take it out and start the next piece with that bit. And thank you!!

Wendy Varley's avatar

Aha!

Johnno's avatar

Gorgeous prose. Made me smile a whole lot. Thank you.

Rebecca Goodall's avatar

If I made you smile that makes me smile! 😃 and I haven’t even had my coffee yet so that’s something haha

Obsidian Blackbird.'s avatar

Great stuff :) I can even smell the place :)

Rebecca Goodall's avatar

Thank you luv!! It smells like pinecones and peanuts and beer.

Mcdude's avatar

Love it👏. What a river of words! Mercy,mercy me.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Rebecca Goodall's avatar

Lawd have Mercy on my soul! Thank you for this first thing I see this morning. Working on the next one. 🙏🤗

Katrina Donham's avatar

What a ride! I LOVED reading this, Rebecca! It's always a treat to read your winding words sprinkled with little bits of Asheville history. Can't wait to read the next!